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Welcome to My Writing Toolkit, where I share an example of my efforts to strengthen and galvanize my writing, including real samples of my own rough drafts – both before and after!
These adventures, for the foreseeable future, are largely intended to improve the quality of my prose rather than focus on big-picture, structural issues. But why do this on a rough draft, when some of this may change or vanish altogether in future drafts? Why not just wait until later?
Three reasons!